> Subtract some adjectives, would that make a difference?
That would help, but that's secondary. They need to add the information I discussed on the GP. That info is incompatible with sweeping, absolutist adjectives, so they would go away.
Sweeping, extreme statements are a tip-off to BS for anything: Reality isn't that simple.
I'd be honestly interested in what an appropriate set of edits would look like. Subtract some adjectives, would that make a difference?