The actual content I would expect is the following 3 points.
1. What the old clause of the license was
2. What kind of unintended side effect it had
3. What the new clause addressing this is
Summing up those 3 points results in a clear paragraph of maybe 5 to 10 lines. Meanwhile I challenge anyone who hasn't read it to extract that content from the article in less than 15 minutes.
Cory Doctorow is an established and prolific author of over 20 years. Pretty sure he's not changing his writing style for people with short attention spans who mislabel things as clickbait.
I feel that people who go on and on about 'clickbait' simply don't like reading... Feed the article to GPT if all you want is a bulleted list of points. Or just skim!